Rough Cut Feedback plan

Based on our rough cut we are going to ask our target audience about what we have so far. We will ask them whether they like it, whether more content needs to be added and if they understand what is being shown to them, and that they understand the storyline so far. This will take place on the 3rd of March.

Diana's Feedback

• It makes sense 
• I like it 

Monique's Feedback

• I like the editing, it's scary
• I understand the storyline
• Nothing more needs to be added

Tia's feedback
Loves the angel shots of when the charterer Samantha is on the ground, where's its like she's blinking.
The transitions are smooth and it makes sense
As well as not knowing the unknown, lots of anticipation

Micheal & Malachy's feedback
It's something different because its based on female characters rather than boys, yet it still has the same excitement because you just don't know what will happen next.
Once the music is put on, it will add to the atmosphere and that's about it

Joshua's feedback
The transitions are sick and the acting is really realistic. The scene where the girls are running looks live. Just get the backing track in and it will be done.  

As these people are the exact target audience we're trying to capture, we now know that we're on the right track and that they will understand the message we're trying to portray. and thanks to this, it's more than likely that we wont need to add in any more tracks, because baring in mind that this is a title sequence not a trailer, it's best to leave the audience in suspense and want to find out for themselves, rather than us feeding them all the good stuff, leaving them to already assume what it's going to happen with a lack of interest.