"Your planning is strong but make sure to post any development in detail. For example, you could talk about finding the music room as a location as this is different to your additional setting posts. Where possible, try to link these posts to your research. For example, have you seen other teen films that are based around music artists? What do the locations look like?
You should continue doing this throughout the production process and reflect on any changes that you make as you go along. You could post targets that you want to achieve in a filming session beforehand and refer back to whether you have done so afterwards.
You could make clearer on your storyboard post that this is a revised version as a result of feedback from your pitch and briefly remind the reader of this feedback.
Lastly, you should delete the ‘Technology Skills audit’ post or copy the content from your pitch as it is blank at the moment. There are also a few spelling mistakes on your Mean Girls analysis."
So from that, I went back and edited my blog on the mean girls, as well as deleting the "Technology Skills Audit" blog. As well as doing blogs of what we plan to do whiles filming and all.
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