Blogging Health Check 2

Feedback

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Good consistent blogging, keep this up! Take on board the feedback especially the level of detail in showing your research into institution and target audience. Your group are working well.
Improvements
- Can you come up with a better way of presenting the storyboard? As I said in health check 1, really think about the presentation of your blog
- Lots of images should be presented in a slideshow
- Institutional detail - why did you select those companies for your films, what research did you do into them? Why have you identified your target audience? Again, What research did you do? Think back to what we covered in class.
- Embed Prezis, Timetoast etc rather than (or as well as) posting links.
- Production schedule link is not live
- Don't leave empty posts with title but no content - complete or delete.

Response

- I had deleted all of the empty posts , while 2 blogs I had to complete .
- For the production  schedule and all of the prezis and timetoats I had embeded the sites onto the blog .
- I have just finished both target audience and  institutional detail blogs and added them .

- person who orginally uploaded the storyboard will be changing the way it is presented on the blog.