21 - Saffron Health Check 1

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23 posts. Really good so far you are on 13/14 marks towards the top of proficient. MUST POST YOUR PRELIM
To improve
- Personalise the blog
- Consider your presentation more carefully. Make sure all posts are well presented and can be read/viewed.
- Post your final remake video and evaluation
- Research a greater variety of teen film title sequences, lots of focus on Breakfast Club and Grease
- Embed Prezis etc rather than posting links.

response to feedback
- As a group we came to ether and choose a different design for our blog so it became more personalised and relates more to the group .

- I went over all my blogs that was from time toast and prezi and embedded each into the blog instead of just copying the link.
- The remake video was already posted on the blog , however we did as a group evaluate it .
- I made sure each post or link can be found and added pictures into the posts to not make it so simple .
- As i had not used a variety of different films i changed a blond used a different film as to not be repetitive .