Pitch feedback.(39/40)

After our pitch, we received feedback from Dan, in ways we can improve our title sequence.

First on all we were told that our pitch was highly informative. As we pretty much covered everything needed for the pitch. But we have to fully establish our storyboard. As it had too much characters. We had 4 characters in the title sequence.
When it could only be based on one in particular, that would make things so much easier for us. As we will not need to use loads of shot, as well as it helping us save more time with actually filming. Therefore, we need to alter our storyboard once more, to finalise things. And get started. Furthermore, it will give us more time to do editing everything together.

We've decided that we will go with the second storyboard. However, instead of having all three characters being shown with insight. We will only have one character being highlighted. That being the character Jasmine. Meaning that we will effectively cut down our filming time, making things 10 times easier for us. As it will give up more time in terms of when we're filming, to get the perfect shots we want. As will as giving us longer editing time, to give our title sequence that professional look.