Thursday 5 March 2015

Dan's Feedback - 05/03/15

 Saffron
Dan watched our final edit of our title sequence and told us that it could be improved by adding reaction shots and more facial close ups.This will show more emotion and create reactions from our audience . He also said that we need to communicate more clearly what has happened to Esther's character in the attack scene, as some people might not understand.

We have one reaction shot of myself already filmed so we are adding that to the title sequence today. The reaction shot is also a facial close up so we are addressing two of Dan's improvements. 

We are also adding Foley sound to our title sequence. The sound of a siren will be used to build tension and create a serious atmosphere. The siren will match the mise-en-scene of Esther in pain on the ground. We are also thinking of adding in a voiceover , to show that Samantha is being followed and is about to be attacked.

Esther
So therefore, we plan to add the reaction shots, as well interoperated black and white effects in some of the shots. Likewise with the sound, we intend to get them to match with each specific scene, to get the message across effectively, rather than leaving the audience wondering how everything links together.

And by then we will finally have the title sequence done, but still we have to sort out the order of the title sequence credits. To finally have everything set in stone.




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